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Showing posts with label Review. Show all posts

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

The Big Game

Friday 13th March 2015


WALT:Use inferencing strategy to find answers to questions based on WALT text.


The Big Game


The game that Karla played, it wasn't very famous because know one knew what was going on so mum divided to take them to watch a rugby came at the park.


When they arrived a bus came when they stepped out and the people that came out were the town rugby players they were so excited to see them. The rugby players then walked to the changing room.

They (the family) went to sit in the front and when the game started the two rugby teams came onto the field and Karla and Mum went to their seat. When Shane did his big run everybody cheered loudly. Next, Shane was going to do a conversion, when Shane kicked the ball into the post’s, Mum and Karla shouted louder than any one.

Friday, 27 February 2015

Scratch


Done a quick edit so you can view it on my blog Anyway Enjoy :P.

Bye Bye Have A Great Tyme.

Friday, 1 November 2013

Friday Night out by Kathy Taylor

Friday Night out by Kathy Taylor


WALT write a review on stories have read


The Story is about a family going to Wellington to watch a rugby game. (The Characters in the Story are Campbell,Max,Jason and Mum)When They go inside Jason gives Campbell some money so Jason can be left alone with Max. After a while Campbell came back and Jason and Max were flirting with two girls, the girls were named Tall girl and Dark haired girl.


Jason frowned when he saw Campbell and so Campbell approached the two girls,Jason and Max “What’s Your Name” says the Tall girl “Campbell” says Campbell.


At the end Jason and Max say to meet them at the tree outside but when Jason,Max and Campbell go outside their Mum honks the horn, so they were like ninja’s and snuck into the car and as they were leaving, Campbell says “Jason and Max were talking to those girls over there” ”Did you?” says Mum “No!” says Jason, as they go along the girls see Campbell and Jason’s and Max’s buried heads.

By Levi.R
 

Thursday, 12 September 2013

A Article Review on A Passion For Ponies by Donna Cherry

A Passion For Ponies by Donna Cherry.

WALT:  review the story we read

This article is about a girl named Chelsea who loved her pony named Teddy. After school Chelsea ran home quickly so she could groom and play with Teddy. Chelsea had a friend named Sarah and she had a pony too. They would play together a lot and groom their ponies together.

Sarah also helped Chelsea groom her pony. Chelsea and Sarah also cleaned up their ponies droppings which looked like small mountains. Sarah loved her pony as much as Chelsea loved Teddy. At the end of the day Chelsea put a warm coat on Teddy so he could be warm and toasty.


If I had a pony I would do the same things that Chelsea and Sarah did I would be as dedicated as they were. I liked the bit about the droppings. It was really funny.