I know, I know. I haven't uploaded anything on my blog relating to Overnight I've been busy ...... and bored this past 2 months and I really didn't want to do anything unless I had to. Anyway sorry for not doing this, even though I'm sure nobody's interested in this.
(Story Start)
BOOOM! A door shuddered as a figure burst through, he had been running for 15 minutes now, he stopped hoping, praying, that the thing that was following him had stopped the chase. He was sure he had seen that thing before, he was sure, but..... but all that could come to mind was his deceased friend.
‘If only...’ Shaking his head, he slapped himself ‘No, no bad Jacob, stop getting depressed’ Jacob had only been 8 when the incident happened, so it had been a bad time for him and the rest of the crew. Jacob’s thoughts came to a halt as a shadow flickered passed, he had just barely registered it. Jacob nodded to himself, albeit fearfully and slowly prepared to break out in a full sprint.
He slowly made his way down the school’s empty -abandoned- hallway, glancing frantically left and right. Jacob found himself in the school’s hall, looking up he saw a sign, he could barely make out what it said. ‘Looks like directions, wish I hadn’t dropped my glasses’ - while running from the thing he had tripped and dropped his glasses. ‘Great, now what?’ Jacob thought sarcastically, walking closer to the sign
To Be Continued (More Coming... Hopefully)
(Story Cliffhanger)
Seriously though I haven't done anything on this so I'm just updating it.
1 comment:
Hi Levi, I like the way that you have used the characters thoughts in this piece of writing, it is great way of giving the reader information about the character. It might be an idea to add the information about Jacob dropping his glasses in his thoughts, so that it doesn't break up the flow of the story. I'm interested to know where you will take this story! I hope you continue it soon.
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