A Piece Of Paradise by Leonie Thorpe

A Piece Of Paradise by Leonie Thorpe

WALT Review the story's we read

This Story is about two gods The Rain God and The Sun God. They would fight all season about who made the better crops .The Rain God did a terrible job on trying to keep the crops growing. All she did was flood all the crops and ruin everything. As for The Sun God he wasn't doing a good job either. All he did was burn every crop to a crisp. So at the end of the season they found each others crops ruined and so they forgave each other and put four stars at the southern end of the village so it could remind them of what they did and that is how the making of the southern cross.

A Article Review on A Passion For Ponies by Donna Cherry

A Passion For Ponies by Donna Cherry.

WALT:  review the story we read

This article is about a girl named Chelsea who loved her pony named Teddy. After school Chelsea ran home quickly so she could groom and play with Teddy. Chelsea had a friend named Sarah and she had a pony too. They would play together a lot and groom their ponies together.

Sarah also helped Chelsea groom her pony. Chelsea and Sarah also cleaned up their ponies droppings which looked like small mountains. Sarah loved her pony as much as Chelsea loved Teddy. At the end of the day Chelsea put a warm coat on Teddy so he could be warm and toasty.

If I had a pony I would do the same things that Chelsea and Sarah did I would be as dedicated as they were. I liked the bit about the droppings. It was really funny.